While I see you must have put some effort into it, which is always admirable, it's really just kind of a regular platform jumper. A bit more effort, like improved sprites or environments would make the game much more fun.
Another thing, it's understandable if English is not your native language, but I'm a bit put off by the poor spelling and grammer. Work on your basic spelling and sentence structure. Just work on actually typing as if you were speaking, instead of just some jumbled words.
By the way, what does 'Deonox' mean? It sounds like a cool word but I don't know what it's supposed to be.
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