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06-14-2008, 08:06 AM
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I hate the sound of Meechonia. It just doesn't fit. I know there isn't really a substitute but I really don't like it. The mudokons just let one guy with a big gun steal the queen? That's insanely stupid. Chapter two was better than chapter one but this is just bad.

I doubt I'll check back on this one because I don't really like their personalities. It's hard to follow the actual personalities but still.

Oh contraire WoF. It's good for expressing. But it's idiotic at a max of 6.

I don't start a new paragraph, just a line.

Yeah.

Yeah.

Probrably.

Err... Yeah again.

He sure did.

I beleive that's right but is it really life-threatening?
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!

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