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06-12-2008, 07:48 AM
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I tried to force my body to shit, ANYTHING to get out, but I just tired myself out.
A bit vulgar, don't you think?


Nonetheless, I liked it. Weird, discriptive to the point where I started to get a little sick (), which made it really good.
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