...(Sighs). You seem to be falling into a trap of paranoia over who reads it. Its fine, there's maybe some repetitive style of commas, but it ain't bad. Splat has a good fic, people just seem to loose interest over time. Its not to do with the quality mostly. If you only do it for the pageviews/comments, then...Yeah. If you don't wanna do it then fine, but don't get too worked up over what people think.
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I am a man. Do not call me otherwise, or you are doing it wrong. Times correctly guessed as a man: Patrick: 1, Mitsur: 1, Daxter king: 1, OANST: More than once, Nemo: 1, alf's brother's mate: 1, Nate: 1, Anonyman!: 1. The assumption everyone is male probably comes from the fact 90% of characters in Oddworld are male. The editpenis
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