I won't be continuing this anymore.
Again. >>
I've run into the same problem I had before; I just wasn't having fun writing it. The characters are dull, I can't get Stranger's personality, and i've added so many fan species (and was planning on adding more) that it doesn't even seem to take place in Oddworld. If I don't like writing it, and nobody likes reading it, whats the point?
Anyway, i've realised a bunch of things I should've done; added more info on Charlotte's childhood, developed her character, ect., but I didn't. I really regret that. >:C
I plan on re-writing this (maybe after I finish Epidemic). I have a bunch of ideas for how this should have been put together that will hopefully help me to write a better fic.
So thats it. Its over, thank god. ^^ This really was terrible.
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