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06-04-2008, 09:57 AM
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Mad ~ Whispers from the past, Odd Beginnings ~

I've always wondered what happened in the past of oddworld, I know we have some info but I want more, so I thought I'd write a fan fic of it

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Chapter 1: Destruction from The Sky
~Odd Beginnings~

The Tribe of Mudos’s civilians were out everywhere, all speculating on what would fly through the night sky. The millions of stars shining through the clear sky, along with the moon towering over the world.

The great Mudos temple lay in the centre of the village, where the Lords and Leaders of Mudos lived and discussed matters and issues. The main court room was the biggest room in the temple, it had chairs all round placed at the edges if the room, high up, judging the Mudokons speakers. The centre where a light shined down was where Mudokons spoke their views and what needs to be dealt with.
A Mudokon with a bronze green like crown stepped forward.

“Yesterday we received word that the Glukkons were planning a full scale attack, which would happen on this very night, they boasted that our destruction would fly from the Sky. This could be a very serious threat to Mudoran!”

All the Mudokons in the high chairs roared in laughter, one of them stood up and spoke whilst trying not to laugh.

“Hah, merely bluff’s to scare us all, what are those long legged no armed smoking spewing monsters capable of anyway? Most likely nothing!”

The Mudokon in the center growled.

“But they’ve gained help from the Vykkers, god knows what they can do now!”

The other Mudokon sniggered again.

“All they do is cut up animals, you only have to threaten them and they quiver in fear!”

The Mudokon in the center was about to speak until a guard Mudokon burst into the court.

“LORDS MASTER, WE’VE JUST RECEIVED WORD THAT THE THE DESTRUCTOR FROM THE SKY IS VERY WELL HEAIDNG HERE!”

The Mudokon in the chair stood gob-smacked. He stuttered.

“How far away was this reported, how long do we have?”

“5 miles sir, but apparently it’s flying at a incredible speed!”

Just then a Roar of flames and sound like no other screamed over the village, shaking the huts and the temples.

The Mudokon in the chair darted to the Mudokon in the centre.

“Magnus WHAT SHOULD WE DO?....Wait…WHERE HAS HE GONE!?”

Magnus was far away from the light, he rushed past the guard and shouted ‘RUN’.

All the Mudokons in the temple started screaming, running everywhere, panicking, screaming!

Magnus Ran as fast as he could, then a sound he had never heard in his life erupted in the distance, a bright light shined and came rocketing through the village, the village it’s self now shaking, heat rushing past. Magnus turned round and screamed, flames of hell came running towards him, engulfing everything in it’s path….

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Hope you like it Advice and feedback is appreciated, and I know with the glukkns arms and legs thing is the wrong way round, but near the end of the story you'll see how I'll incorporate it
And the Mudokon in the center of the court was Magnus, sorry if I didn't make that too clear..
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