I like Vhern. He's got an evil personality. Trap... Uh-Oh. I sense a huge problem. It's a hide and jump out when he's in the middle type I'm sure. Now if they had a self destruct button then they could do that and hop off as the ship blew up. Dan would be left behind to fight Nedd because nobody would remember him. Then Dan would make it off just in time. Yeah that's a really bad ending but it'd be cool in a movie. Then it might suggest a sequal when they find Intern handprints and footprints. (Insert long "ooo" sound.) A sequal! Wow that'd be cool. Beg your pardon I wandered away from the chapter which was, as all the other ones,[Mr. Burns accent]Excellent![/Mr. Burns accent] I want another chapter!
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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