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05-22-2008, 01:49 PM
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Chameleonic Lifeforms, No Thanks!
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Don't stop writing
Good chapter, exciting and such. I'd say you wanna be careful about dragging scenes like this on too much as it can get a bit dull, but it's ok so far!
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