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04-19-2008, 09:32 AM
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Ooc: I wonder if Hoss heard the racket thingy after Garit hit the cart. Must have been when he was drooling.
Ic: Garit was already shuffling the dirt and sand in the river when he saw two grubbs. 'They haven't seen me yet. No need to go and tell them I'm here.' He carried on moving the dirt around with little luck. He only had three small nuggets of gold in his pocket. Glancing at the grubbs he saw a glitter in their hands. 'Gold? They found it too?' He thought. Part of him wanted to threaten them into giving them to him, but the other part wanted to stay inconspicious. He choose the second part of him. Slowly and quietly, he crept down the river looking for better places. His pocket was now filled with five. Six. Seven. "Tresspasers!!!" A voice cried. 'Oh sh*t they found me.' He thought as he stretched his arms up and turned around. He then saw a wolvark, a slig, and a slog. They were talking to the grubbs and not him. 'That was close.' He thought as he looked around for cover. A large moss-covered rock stoud beside the riverbank. Slowly backpedalling towards it, he accidently splashed his foot in the water. Quickly retracting it he then set his back to the behind of the rock, hoping that the nobody had heard him. He then waited for the conversation to continue.
Ooc: Now to wait for tomorrow.
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