Oooh swatiska scar... Original. What the problem. That speech thing sounds bit like the consience thing in Pinochio. Too bad Dan didn't think to take the leeches to suck out the cylonite stuff. Great chapter maybe a little confusing with the fight but whenever I read if forget the last word ending in a big mess where I have to read 27 sentances over again. More!
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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