Poor Dan. Lucky Ian. I thought the Durc was kind of funny in this chapter. What's happend to Dan? By the way there was a single spelling mistake. That would be when "Dan knew better than that" knew was spelled new. Awsome chapter and the only confusing bit was the thing with the slig that said "Is anyone there.". And as a small nitpicky note how do interns know that their teeth look like that?
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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