Well, my honest opinion. Not bad, but need alot of work.
Now, I personally havnt used this GameMaker, so I don't know the ins-and-outs of what is possible with it, but there are quite a few flaws.
For one, why does punching kill things that are nowhere near me? Also, why does punching automaticaly make me turn to the right?
The starting screen is... well, messy, to say the least. I sugest rearanging the insructions ect to make the whole thing look neater. Maybe a change of font, aswell?
Some of the animation looks horrible- for example, the chanting. However, the levels actaully look quite charming, in a simple, cartoony way.
However, the rest of it- the gameplay, the character sprites, and the implementation of Oddworld stuff, is pretty damn cool.
Nice work, can't wait for new levels.
