The music is beyond perfection. The way Abe walks has a strangely alive feel about it. The fart isn't good. It should be the exact same as Abe's real fart. The backround doesn't fit in very well but if you could make Abe bigger or make the backround smaller then it would look good.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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