Heehee, awesome.
Aaaanyway...Two crits to help.
1), I find it kinda irresponsible and perhaps not Stranger that Stranger sorta ditched the grubbs like that.
2), Plus I think his bounty clothes should have holes since the grubbs picked them up with arrows in the depantsing scene. And his pants were ripped up by the outlaws.
3), Remember that Charlotte just lost her dad, the guy that raised her 'till adulthood. If he was a good enough dad and not some sicko abusive parent, she's gonna have to grieve, i.e., cry or just plain go numb or whatever.
4), I sense a Stranger pairing...Nothin' wrong with that, though 8). I just expect that I guess, it seems Stranger is the kind of guy fangirls dream of.