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12-12-2007, 01:01 AM
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Ok hope you wernt put off by the intro any way the story .

Part2

Doug walked into a small meat packing pant run by a glukkon chump the factory was no where near the size of rupturefarms, about the size about the size of a house. the chumps office was dark lit by a single light bulb , a grubby desk with mold festering on it and rusting filing cabinet in the corner. Doug knocked on the door then swiftly walked in the office. "Ya here about the job?" said the glukkon. "Yeh said Doug" his one good eye circling the room. "well heres the deal." said the glukkon"i want ya to go to rupture farms and get some files ill contact you when your there." "How will you know when im there asked Doug". The glukkon smiled his cigarette smoke going into his eye . "Ok said Doug and he left. As Doug left the plant a question he wanted to ask had just come to his head what did the meat packing plant make? he heard no Machinery or sligs or in fact anything he soon forget this and traveled towards the stockyards thinking about what he was going to do when he was there.

So should i continue with this story or start a new one?????

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