Thanks guys, and no i haven't given up. :P
Chapter 7 - Revival
"Jin!?!? No..this cant be happening!" Sena picked up Jin and examined his shoulder, it was worse then he thought. The cut had got worse, and a massive, red line was going down his arm. "Internal Bleeding.." Sena muttered to himself. Then he examined the middle of the huge cut, and blood was squirting out. Sena could hear Jin panting and gasping for air. "Sena...Help...Me.." Jin managed to whisper. "I will Jin! I promise!" Sena said, fighting back the tears. Sena had only just met this person, yet he felt a strong connection, and strong friendship between them. With Jin on his back, Sena set off down the hallway, opening the prison cells and telling the mud's to follow him and Jin. As they were walking, the lights suddenly cut off. There was a whooshing noise. "Whats that?" A mud murmured. "I don't know.." Sena said. Suddenly, he saw something enormous as the lights flickered. A massive tidal wave of water was coming towards them. The factory must of used this as a trap to kill them! "RUN!!!" Sena shouted out. The mud's and him ran for their lives, and then they saw a door saying: "Vykkers paramedics - Got a cut? Come here!" "Quick, in here!" Sena said. The mud's and Sena ran into the place, and slammed the iron door shut. The water couldn't affect them from there. Sena spotted a Vykker, but he was unarmed. "Intruders..?!" The vykker spitted out. Sena and the mud's pinned him against the wall. "Fix up Jin, and we'll let you go." Sena said, pushing the Vykker harder against the wall. "Alright..alright..just get off me!!!" The vykker urged. He gave the vykker Jin, who was now almost dead. "QUICKLY!" Sena bursted out. The vykker did some disgusting work. He opened up Jin's shoulder, injected him with things, and eventually, after some hours work, Jin was ok again. He stood up, and Saw the vykker. He summoned a bomb and stuck it to the Vykkers head. "You helped me, but your an industrial." Jin murmured. The vykker ran around panicking, and found his bone saw on the table. He was just about to kill Jin when the bomb exploded, and killed him instantly.
"JIN!!" Sena said, extremely happy that his new friend didn't die because of the wound.
"Hey Sena. Thanks for looking after me." Jin smiled at him. "Well, C'mon mud's, follow me! There's a bird portal over there!" The mud's followed Jin to the bird portal, which had circled in the corner of the room. Jin chanted, and a blue light appeared. The mud's jumped into it, and were freed. Suddenly, another alarm went off. "Vykkers paramedics have been broken into - Proceeding to let off Gas." "Oh odd." Jin said. Suddenly a Gas timer was on the wall - 30 seconds. "Quick, lets get out!" Sena said, and tried the doors.
No use though, as the doors were locked. "Wait...Jin..those birds haven't disappeared you know." Jin turned around, and chanted once more. But the bird portal was still open. "They must of left it open for us, lets go!" Suddenly, the green gas emerged from the ceiling. They jumped into the portal, and arrived in Necrum. "We're in..Necrum?" Jin said. "Why would they want us to go here?"
END OF CHAPTER 7!!
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Whaddya think? Sorry its a bit small. >_<