It might have been the longest, but I didn't notice it while I was reading. The storyline kept me reading on, I was eager to find out how the situation between Anni and Nova would turn out.
It's really clear that you did some research on medical and psychological topics. Especially in the last bit, in the Vykkers' speech. Great work.
Sometimes, especially when I'm reading these chapters, I get the idea of doing some fan art drawings for the story...
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