De-panting scene:
Take1: Caste Raider picks up the notes. It's unfinished homework. "You need some help with this Stranger?" Caste Raider asks.
Take2: Caste Raider picks up the notes. "Wow! The doctor said you gotta go on a diet? That is unfair!"
Take3: Caste Raider is about to pick up the notes but then he notices they aren't there. Stranger has them sticking out of his mouth. "What?" He asked slightly muffled.
Take4: Caste Raider picks up the notes and askes "Is this your card?"
Take5: Caste Radier picks up the notes and says "What are you hiding freaky boy?" He then looks disgusted and says "That is really gross Stranger! Eating that food!" Stranger says "I got a dollar for it though." with a look of triumph on his face.
Take6: Stranger drops the notes and Caste Raider picks them up and reveals that it's a girlfreind note. All the outlaws say "Oooooooo! Whos is the lucky lady?"
Notes can be alot of things.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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