Ok, this is my first ever fan fiction, so bear with me if i make HUGE mistakes, or rubbish writing, i just wanted to give it a go.
Hope or glory - There will be parts to this, with chapters in between.
Part 1 - The start of the chaos
Chapter 1 - Birth
The mudokon child screamed. The evil look on the surgeon's faces was a horrific thing to look at. Ignoring the screams, they continued examining him as he had just hatched. Once he was fully examined, he was thrown back into a cage, where he spent most of his life. He became a floor-scrubber, and had a pretty good job. But a terrible accident happened when he was just 7. He was picking up his bucket full of water, when he slipped, and accidentally let the water fall all over a sligs pants. The circuits buzzed. Electricity shot all around the slig, and he was knocked out. A slig noticed this, grabbed him by the neck, and punched him numerous times in the face. Then, he whispered into his bloody ear: "You better not do that again, young punk. Otherwise, there's a new job for you under the meat saw." The slig dropped the young mudokon and left him to cry. But only a couple of minutes later, he came back and told him to clean up the blood he left all over. The slig that was zapped was taken away, whilst he was left to whimper whilst working.
The Mudokon, Jin, was now 17. He was still working at the factory, Tasty-Treaties. He had finally finished cleaning the sligs bathroom. "Ugh, yuck. This place smells so bad..I'm going to puke!" He murmured to himself. He walked out of the bathroom, smelling like urine and something foul. He went back to his cage, and noticed something. There was someone new moved next to him, but he was on his bed, unconcious. Jin looked around, and walked up to this new mud. He looked, and saw lots of blood around him, and decided leave it. As he sat in his cage, he said to himself: "New people, they just dont know how to behave.." But little did he know, that this mudokon was actully powerful. And he could help him to escape and live a free life.
End of chapter one.
So, whaddya think?