Good ending of AO:
Take1: Molluk comes in. After opening the hatch to the spinning thing it reveals not a fan but a bunch of balloons and Molluk says: "April fools!"
Take2: Mullok: "I was just kidding. Sheesh some people can't take a joke."
Take3: The slig pulls the lever but Abe doesn't fall in. The slig pulls it again but harder and nothing happens. Then the slig pulls it even harder and then it snaps sending the slig plummeting and Abe shoots straight through the ceiling. Mullok gets shocked by the lightning and BigFace comes in with a confused expression.
Good ending of AE:
Take1: When the glukkon turns around he has a goofy moustache and glasses on.
Take2: The Brewmaster turns around and says: "Be more careful you stupid employes!"
Good ending of MO:
Take1: Abe: "Now we get your caviar." Munch nods his head like he is supposed to but then stops and says: "What?"
Take2: Abe "Now we get your fish sticks." Munch gives Abe the hairy eyeball.
Take3: BigFace walks in and asks: "What do I do in this scene?'
Depanting scene in SW:
Take1: Caste Raider picks up the notes and reveales that it's a playboy magazine.
Take2: Caste Raider doesn't notice the notes. He steps on them and slips.
Scene in AO where Abe gets a handscar:
Take1: Abe: "Father please help me!" Darth Vader shows up and is about to pick up BigFace when he says: "Wait a minute?!"
Take2: BigFace shoots the lightning in the opposite direction. Abe: "Next time take off the mask".
Take3: Same as before only a scrab walks by and gets a scar on it's leg.
Take4: The same scrab gets another scar and becomes... not the shrykull but Abe!
Not too good but I love making these.
Edit: An extra!!!
Scene in AE where the mudokons drink brew:
Take1: Mudokon pushes button twice and a huge brew bottle flies out and rams the mudokon.
Take2: The mudokon pushes the button twice and a short message says that he needs to insert moolah.
Take3: The mudokon misses the button and breaks the machine. Mudokon: "Oops!"
Take4: The mudokon doesn't push it down hard enough. He tries again but it just make all 99 of the brew bottles pop out and start shooting through the dispensor hole like a machine gun. Abe: "Take cover!"
Take5: The mudokon holds down the button and the machine swells and blows up.
Take6: The mudokon is about to press the button when he sees it's empty.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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Last edited by Oddey; 11-10-2007 at 08:20 AM..
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