Scene in AO where Abe gets his hand scars:
Take1: BigFace pulls out a tatoo thing. Abe: "What the?"
Take2: BigFace: "You sure you want to do this?" Abe: "Grrrrrr..."
Take3: BigFace does the normal thing but Abe doesn't look like he is in pain.
Take4: BigFace does it right but Abe says: "This is like Star Wars."
Random scene with a slog in AO:
Take1: The slog jumps through Abe. Abe turns around revealing a hole in his chest.
Take2: The slog doesn't jump it just says it's not hungry.
Scene in AE where the mudokons drink brew:
Take1: After taking a sip the mudokon says "Ew! This tastes terrible!" Abe: "You were supposed to pretend to drink it."
Take2: Mudokon: "This one is empty." Abe slaps his forhead.
Take3: Mudokon drinks the bottle. Mudokon: "I really need to pee!" He runs offscreen. Not long after there is a toilet flush. When he comes back there is toilet paper on his foot.
Take4: Mudokon takes one look at the brew then says "I can't drink this! I have a doctor's note!"
Take5: The scene goes right until the flying slig come. Abe forgets to jump and the slig bumps into him. Not long after a faint splat is heard.
Take6: The slig's harness breaks. Slig: "Mayday! Mayday!"
Finished.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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