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Krett stepped into another strange corridor. "Well It sure is a lot bigger then I remember it," He said. Krett knew exactly where he wanted to go, but not so much how to get there. Then he saw someone up ahead and walked toward him. "Excuse me," Krett said "Could you please point me in the right direction? I'm looking for Arnie. I believe he runs this place now."
(the profile thread said I had to post my profile here but I'm not sure and wouldn't like to take up space, am I supposed to?)
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You do need to post the profile here, it will be helpful, and there are a few problems:
1. An entrance (usually be train) has not been posted, just a 'stepped into the corridor'. There needs to be a better introduction to the factory than this (unless it was explored in the backstory sufficiently).
2. 'Saw someone up ahead'. There are no NPC's (non player characters. The only characters present here are the ones we have put into it), and since you have not stated exactly where you are, and even if you had, it is likely characters would have moved around overnight between this and the last W@RF. It would make more sense if you found the dormitories or something, and perhaps tried to wake employees up (not recommended, Big Bro's don't like being woken up early without prior notice), or perhaps wait 'till other players have started RPing again and begun moving character's around/ Meanwhile, yours may wait in the cafeteria or something, since that's a common destination for breakfast.
That is, off course, unless you are referring to another of your own characters if you have any, but I doubt that :P