[mitsur]

I'm not angry about you just jumping out and writing, I'm angry that you just grabbed something I worked on and ripped it apart without even asking. Contrary to popular belief, I still come on and check my mailbox. Hell, I would have even helped you out on this.

Just ask next time.

Oh, and yes, you need to lay off the crack cocaine and meth before you work on the story. My head hurts from the first chapter, it just runs around too much and has no coherency. It dosen't need to have a plot, but it needs to at least have a form.

Uh, and yes, shameless plugging here, but I got bored and made myself a new sig, and cheated with the png format by just giving the image a border with the exact same shade of green as the native format, so it dosen't look any different.