I thank all those that have commented.
And I'd like to say sorry for having temporarily stopped this and the other one for....Ages....
Plz don't necrum the thread, I plan on using it later. I'm trying to do my Stranger fanfic at the moment, you may all kick me till I can't sit down.
Since I've kept you waiting and probably still will, I thought give a...Erm, present. My fist Oddworld fanfic BEFORE I edited it so fancy-fied-ly.
Please note,
I KNOW OF TEH TERRIBLE TYPOS AND GENERAL NO-SENSE-NESS, I thought I'd just put this up here for humour....You may laugh at its badness, but please do so nicely...If that makes sense....Well here ya go.
The story begins after Abe's, Munch's and the Stranger's adventures. It takes place in the more modern parts of the continent Mudos, away from the west side(Stranger's side), in whatever side Abe and Munch were on. It will progress to the to the more exotic "east side", where more different and exotic species live, and more land is untouched by glukkons-a greedy rich industrial race race who "eat rainforests for brekfast".
The species are divided into three categories-industrial, native and wildlife.
Industrialists are those who live a more modern lifestyle than natives-proper housing, technology, rich, have a job-like us people. But they tend to be to be selfish, and and not care, or give a toss about natives or wildlife, making them slaves or meat products, and taking their land for their own. Such species are glukkons, the rich, vykers, the scientists, sligs, the ones with jobs, and clakkerz-the western consumers.
Natives are the ones with human intelegience, but live without technology-wariors, religious species, spears and facepaint-you get the idea. They might not have electronics, but they tend to be nicer, and not see wildlife as meat products all the time. Such species are modokuns, gabbits, and scyodians and deraxions, which live in the east.
Wildlife species are the animals of Oddworld, slaughtered for their meat by industrialist. Such species are scrabs, paramites, elums, meep, and fleeches, a vyker experament. But lately, they've made a new kind of experament, and for what reason?
A three-legged light purple four-armed large headed ugly creature walked through a corridor, and into a room. The automatic doors shut behind him. He walked past a table with a newspaper on, it saying "DR. BRAINWAVE STILL MISSING". He walked into a anther room, which was dark and large, with a a glowing green pod in it. He walked up to another creature like himself, and spoke.
"Is it... Ready, Dr. Jekyl?" He stared at the pod. "... Yes... The breakthrough in vyker technology! Which will make us rich! Our glukkon-funded plan which will earn us billions of moolah! Is! Ready! Ready, Dr. Hyde!" "We must test it to see if it will kill, if it doesn't, we might be doomed". Said Dr. Hyde. "Now, release the experament! The zrilufet!... WHY ARE YOU NOT PRESSING THE SHINY BUTTON?!?" He screamed manically, making Dr. Jekyl jump. "Because, I'm scared for two reasons-one, this experament could kill us, two, you need your medication, Norbert Hyde". "Oh, sorry". He winced a bit as he injected the green liquid into his arm. "Well, if you won't press the button, and I won't press the button, then theres only one solution!"
A creature with stitches on his mouth, was lying down, listening to rock music from his headphones. "Miiiike!" Hearing the voice, he took them off, rolled his eyes, and went to the big dark room. He pressed the button, then walked off. The glass from the pod came down, and liquid spilt everywhere.
The creature had two floppy ears, and two purple ears. She had a red torso, with a yellow belly. Her head was fluffy, with pink closed eyes. She had light brown arms and legs with no shoulders. Behind her legs were two more red legs with a claw on each end. She had a green worm-like head for a tail. She had purple eyes on stalks, and light brown "fingers" around her pink mouth. She wore brown rags. Her body was delicate-looking like a pretty female animal in mythoology. She fell when the tube came down, and lay limp on the floor. The vykers grinned to themselves.
What would happen next?
Chapter 2