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08-09-2007, 06:30 AM
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CHAPTER III: A TRIP IN THE SEWERS

[We saw Munch, Mitras and his slog Boby free Abe from the prison. But they were discovered, and the only way to escape is from a slide... that conduces in the sewers!]

Abe: My head... OUCH!
Mitras: What a big fall! Luckly something have cushion it!
Munch: Yes.... my back!
Abe: Now I want to know why there is a Slig with you, Munch!
Munch: Ehm! It's hard to explain...
Abe: Hard to explain??? Are you allied with the MAGOG CARTEL?
Munch: No! Believe in me, Abe! This Slig can help us!
Abe: Really? Don't make me laugh!
Mitras: Any problem if I help your friend, are you jealous?
Abe: I hate Magog Cartel, I don't corporate with it!
Boby: GRRRRRRRR!!!!!
Mitras: I don't work anymore for it!
Abe: You think really that I take the bait? It not works with me!
Mitras: Well, now I see because Glukkons hate Mudokons!
Abe: What are you trying to tell????
Mitras: GRRRR!
Abe: GRRRR!
Munch: Ehm! May I ask a question?
Abe & Mitras: NO!
Abe: You Sligs are the worst thing that exist in Oddworld!
Mitras: Well, at least we don't stink like Mudokons!
Munch: How long this row will last?
Boby: WOF! WOF! GRRRRRR!
Mitras: What happens, Boby?
Munch: Look behind you! What are those green worms?
Mitras: Green worms????
Abe: THEY ARE FLECHEES!!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!
Munch: Why run? They looks so innocuous!
Abe: If they catch you, you will become their food!
Munch: Ehm! There is a problem!
Abe: What?
Munch: I can't move, I'm tied to this barrow!
Mitras: Don't wast time to untie her (him), just push the barrow!
Abe: We have a genius between us!
Munch: Oh no! Don't begin again with this story!!!! JUST RUN AWAY!!!!
Boby: GRRRR! WOF! WOF!
Mitras: BOBY, DON'T BARK AT THEM, RUN!
(gunshot)
Mitras: THEY ARE TOO MANY! AND I FINISH THE AMMO!

[After a big run for avoid the death, the crazy "threesome" encouter a waterfall in front of them!]

Abe: Oh no, and now??
Munch: We must jump!
Mitras: Let me think! I prefer to die "eated by the Fleeches", or I prefer to die "drowning in the water"?
Abe: Shut up and jump!
All: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!
-SPLASH!!!!!-
Munch: Fortunately now I free from the barrow! But where are Abe and Mitras (and his Slog)?
Abe: I hate swim...
Munch: Eh eh! Abe, I never thought that you can swim!
Abe: Yes, I make practice...
Boby: WOF?
Abe: Oh! Here's his dog, and him? Where are?
Munch: I go to see underwater.
Abe: ...
[After a while]
Munch: Found him!
Mitras: Glab! Damn robopants! Thanks Munch!
Munch: Well, I pay off the debt!
Abe: OK! Now we can proceed!
[They reach a low water zone]
Mitras: !!!
Abe: Hey... c'mon, we haven't all the day!
Mitras: My pants, they are oxidized!
Abe: OH NO! Other problems!!!!
Munch: And now? How you will move!
Abe: Just leave him here... Ih ih!
Munch: C'mon Abe, stop to be bad with him!
Mitras: You are lucky that I'm not a "normal" Slig... or you will se what will happen! SOB! I MUST LEAVE HERE MY FIRST PAIR OF ROBOPANTS AND MY MACHINE GUN, NEVER CHANGED FROM 3 YEARS!!!!! BUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! .......EJECT!
[Mitras comes down from his pants!]
Munch: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Boby: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Abe: ...........................
Mitras: What are you looking! We Slig sleep without pants! Well, go on!
Abe: Now you are less slow than Munch!
Mitras: Are you in hurry? Why don't you take me with you?
Abe: BLEACH! I don't want to touch a Slig!
Mitras: I don't need your help, I have Boby!
Abe: Munch, come here, I will take you for hurry up!
[So Mitras get on Boby and Abe take Munch with him. So, after some minutes of walk, they reach a ladder that go up from somewhere]
Abe: A ladder, Munch, can go up?
Munch: Yes, I can... but Mitras and Boby, who will take them? Please Abe...
Abe: MMMM... I have no choice...
[So Abe, thanks to Munch, bring Boby and Mitras during the climb]

CONTINUE...
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