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08-07-2007, 12:26 PM
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Continuing

CHAPTER II: TO THE ABE'S RESCUE

After leaving the Mudokons village, Munch & Mitras going into the place where Abe was captured! Thanks to Boby, that sniffed the dirty Abe's pants!

Munch: So this is the place that Abe was captured?
Mitras: Eh eh! My faithful Boby never make mistakes when he sniffs something! Nice works Boby, here a biscuits for you!
Boby: WOF! WOF!
Munch: Well, we are in the right place, and now?? Asks Boby to find another trail!
Mitras: Wait, he is still sniffing!!
Boby: WOF!
Mitras: Follow him!

Seem that Boby have find the correct trail!! After a bit they reach a big building surrounded by an eletrict gate

Mitras: This is the prison! I never see it before!
Munch: Frightful!!!
Mitras: We can't be see by the Big Bro Sligs, we have no chance with them!
Munch: Why you say "we have no chance"? You are a Slig so you haven't any problem if you want to enter in the prison!
Mitras: I forgot about it!
Munch: You are very strange...
Mitras: OK, I can enter, but you? You can't stay here, if they discovered you... your lungs are ready to replace the Lady Margaret's!
Munch: OPS!
Mitras: I have a plan, just listen me!

After 5 minutes

Munch: Do you really think that this plan will works?
Mitras: Well, is the only good idea that I have thinked!
Munch: If you think that drag me and tell at Sligs that you have captured me is a good idea... OK, I will believe...
Mitras: If the brain in your head knowns another plan, we will use it...
Munch: ....
Mitras: Now pretend you fainted!
Munch: ....
Mitras: OK, that's good, now to the prison.

Mitras reach with the "fainted Munch" the prison's entrance, Big Bro Sligs starts to make questions!

BigBro #1: Stop! Identify yourself!
Mitras: I captured this Gabbit!
BigBro #2: First we must see if is really fainted! Hey, where you put the feather???
BigBro #1: Here's!
Mitras (thinking): Oh no! I hope that the Gabbits don't suffer the tickle...
The BigBro Slig tries in different parts the feather, but Munch seem to doesn't suffer the tickle!
BigBro #2: Is really faint!
BigBro #1: Good job, Lady Margaret will be happy. Her dream will become truth! You can pass! Leave the Gabbit to the Slig at the entrance!
Mitras (thinking): (sigh). (with a low voice): You are lucky Munch, you Gabbits are really viscid!!!
Munch (with a low voice): Thanks to the compliment... How you can avoid the Slig at the entrance?
Mitras: Let me think...

The strange duo finally enter in the prison!

ReceptionSlig: Welcome to the prison, if you have someone to leave us, just put it here!
Mitras: This is a Gabbit! It needs water for live! Where I can find a pool?
ReceptionSlig: A Gabbit? They weren't amphibians??
Mitras: This is the last Gabbit in the world! If he die! Lady Margaret won't have his lungs anymore!!! You wants really that this happens??
ReceptionSlig: No no, you're right!!! We have a little pool, just go in that hallway, at the end there is a big pool, leave the Gabbit here!
Mitras: Thanks!

Mitras, availing of the Slig's distraction, enters in the hallway for the cells!

Mitras: For now the plan is going good!
Munch: It's boring...
Mitras: Well, we are lucky! Now the Sligs are sleeping!

After 5 minuter of searchs

Boby: WOF! WOF!
Mitras: Good, we have found him! He is behind this metal door! (Mitras starts to read): "Attention, in this cell is incarcerated the "1° public enemy of the MAGOG cartel". Is prohibited open the door at least that you want to die!"
Munch: Nice works, but now how we can open the door?
Mitras: Eh eh! There is a security keyboard, but I don't know the password!
Munch: Fine, and now?
Mitras: We must found the password!
Munch: Oh yeah! Who has got it?
Mitras: We must go to the Slig's lockers!
Munch: It's a suicide!
Mitras: Well, you may stay in the pool. Now there aren't Sligs, so you can stay there with no problems!
Munch: OK, bring me there!

Mitras leave Munch in the pool, and goes to the Slig's Lockers!

Mitras (thinking): There are over 200 lockers! What it will be??
Slig: Are you searching something friend?
Mitras: Yes, I forget the Abe's cell password!
Slig: Oh... I forget to feed him. I don't want do it! The password is 1234567890! The food is in the kitchen, you can't miss it!
Mitras: Thanks!

First Mitras goes to the pool, but when he arrives, Munch isn't here!

Mitras: OH NO! Where she (he) goes? She (will) be bring away? Boby, sniff the Munch's smelly!
Boby declines
Mitras: C'mon! If you do that, I will give you all biscuits you wants!

Boby doesn't think other times and begin to sniff the Munch's trail, even if he really smelly bad! They arrive, but... Munch is in a barrow and a Vykker is going to remove his lungs!

Munch (thinking): Damn you Mitras!!!!
Mitras (thinking): Oh no! Now I must do something! Ah ah... great idea.
Vykker: Now be calm, your lungs will be removed in an istant...
Munch: YAY!
Mitras: Ehi Doctor!
Vykker: Eh? Slig can't stay here, Slogs too!
Mitras: Sorry for my intrusion doctor, but I see a fuzzle that is escaped from a cage!!
Vykker: WHAT? OH NO! WHERE IT ESCAPED?? WHERE IT ESCAPEEEED? (and runs away)
Mitras: He he, very stupid!
Munch: Thanks to you a Vykker may have cutted me in half!
Mitras: There is no time to talk, now I'm gonna to free you!
Vykker: Ehi! What the hell are you doing?????
Munch: Good move, Mitras!!!
Vykker: Now you can't escape! (the Vykker take a big surgical axe)
Mitras: AAAARRRGHH!!!!
Boby: CAIN!
Munch: SOB!
Vykker: HEY! PUT YOUR HANDS AWAY FROM MY GABBIT!
Mitras: This is my Gabbit!
Munch: I'm not the Gabbit of anybody!!!
Vykker: WHAT YOU WANT! CRAZY SLIG! I WILL ACTIVATE THE ALARM!!
(Alarm): WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mitras: I should to oil my pants!
Munch: Continue to run Mitras, if the mad doctor get us! Who will take care of my 150 sons???
Mitras: -_-

Avoiding Sligs, Munch, Mitras and Boby arrive at the Abe's cell!

Munch: Hurry, they are arriving!
Sligs: YOU HAVE NO WAY TO RUN! JUST SURRENDER!!!!
Mitras: OPEN!
Abe: ??? It's time to eat?
Mitras: No, it's time to escape!
Abe: Munch, what are you doing in a barrow?
Munch: I will tell you when we can exit!
Sligs: STOP! (start to shoot)
Abe: TURN RIGHT!!
Sligs: HURRY, GET THEM!!!
Mitras: Where this hallway go?
Abe: It's a slide!
Mitras: And where that slide conduces?
Abe: Who know?
Mitras: I hope isn't the meat slasher!
All: AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! CAIIIIIN!
Slig #1: They are entered in the sewer slide!
Slig #2: They will not escape from here!
Sligs: Ah ah ah ah ah!

CONTINUE...
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