Very impressed with this chapter. It clearly shows what kind of life a Mudokon and a Slig has in this factory. I'm utterly flabbergasted by this new style that you have been using in the past chapters. Only inspires me more to continue writing I write now in RPGs.
I loved the scene of the Mudokon making a speech toward the entire crowd. Although, that Mudokon had a lot of nerve. The Mudokon must have known that by causing a disagreement with the brainwashed knowledge that they have, he would be shot. The others, would only be left with the idea that they were in danger and were scammed from a living. Assuming all of the Mudokons listened to Freg. So did this Mudokon die to save the others? If so, I appluad him. If he did it just to make a point and did not think for once that he would get killed for, one, assulting a Slig security member, and two, causing a speech, then well. I like the idea, but not why he did it then.
I still can't wait to see if other characters will get involved, and when does the Robotic Guard come in play.
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