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Nat.... That seems so familiar. I don't know why.
Anyway, that was a great chapter. It revealed how your characters are all connected to each other. It even showed a little more about where the people came from. This is one of your best chapters yet.
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I've been wanting to get to Mudegasi Village for quite some time now and am quite happy with how it turned out. ^^
As for Nat.. could it be that Doe uses his name in W@RF coincidentally? Does the name have any
significant meaning?
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*dances* I can't wait for Part Two! 
P.s. Berathen reminds me a lot of Marvak. <3 |
Also mad love to my heroine Marvak who edited this chapter for me.
Seeing as you have yet to put up your fan comic how do I know your not stealing Berathen's personality for Marvak. :P