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Great, but Arrack actually has pupils intact. His eyes and mouth aren't damaged. Also, on the gruesome thing, it would help if you made his face red, as Praetyre had to remove the entire front layer of his mutilated face after it had been softened, torn by Slogs, and put in the Recycler. Then, he had a massive infection, and they had to pop a toxic pimple so big it caused half of his organs to fly out. They then restitched him, but the amount of blood left caused an anaemic Chronicler to commit suicide by ripping his own stomach out with his bare hands. Hope that gives you a better idea.
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Great job. I'm looking forward to seeing your other renditions.