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06-30-2007, 02:05 AM
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Zozo the Zrilufet
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OOC: Ya know Slax, I think you still need some grammar improvement, commas would be good.

IC
(Cafeteria)
Tiny nodded, still crying, and picked up Tiro. The mudokon smiled weakly in his huge arms as he got an idea.
"Tiny...Do you think you could open that door for us so we could go help Agent?"
"Okay..." He sobbed. He tottered towards the door as he cried quieter, and shoved it open. (OOC: Was it locked? Nobody answered my question!) Tiro and Tiny watched as Dimitrio burst out of the door and towards where he had heard Agent 80085's voice.
"AGENT! WHERE ARE YOU!?"
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(Kitchen)
Agent moaned as she was lifted and carried and her strength faded. She reached out, waving a hand at her gun, but couldn't reach it. She lay limp over the sligs shoulder and snored quieter than normal, but still loud.
"Mommy, I'm tired..." She muttered, hearing Dimitrio's voice in the distance.
"Dimi...?"

Outside the kitchen door, Dimitrio ground to a halt as he saw Scarface sitting at the bottom of the door. The old feelings of fear came back to him as his hyperventilating started and the older slig got up. Dimitrio felt paralzed by fear as the older slig stalked closer to him.
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