I also felt it was a little long. My bad. ^^;;
I understand how Lorne felt with Munch's Oddysee. Its so hard to take things out of your creations. Hopefully the next chapter will be shorter.
As for the female Interns, well I wasn't sure if Interns had females or not. I assumed they were a eusocial species. ^^;;
Thanks for the comment!
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