This chapter seemed very interesting and I really liked how the Interns came into the story. It became real cool to see how people imagined Interns acting like without Vykkers keeping them in check.
Now, my only critisism is that it seemed really long. Chapter 5 introduced a bunch of elements to the story that seemed a little overwhelming. I guess you couldn't have divided the story into further pieces, that wouldn't make sense. But it just seemed really long. No offense of course. It seemed a bit much.
And where are the female Interns? You can't have a rave without a female Intern!
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