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06-19-2007, 01:08 AM
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"Making a character related to an official character, having them fight the baddies in one of the games. . ."
I don't see what's so bad about that, you can be related to Abe if you're a Mudokon, they're all born from the same queen, so they're all technically related.

Anywho, a long read, I've took this one up for..

Matthew Exodst:
SPECIES
CANON SPECIES

1) Is your character a slig, clakker, or other usually mean species, but nice?
= No.
1a) Just because they are?
= No.

2) Is your character a gabbit or steef, even though Stranger and Munch are supposed to be the only ones left? (There could be more steefs though)
= No.

3) Is your character one of the eusocial species (species with a queen, sligs, glukkons etc), and a female?
= No.
3a) But not a queen?
= No.
3b) But still fertile?
= No.
3c) A pre-queen 'princess'?
= No.
3d) And not a promiscuous breeder?
= No.

NON CANON SPECIES
4) Is your character a super duper vykker experiment?
= No.
4a) A hybrid of Oddworld creatues?
= No.
4b) With some super powers added to them?
= No.

5) Is your character from some species you made up?
= No.
5a) A considerably good species? (Like most or all of the species in it are good, don't enslave others etc)
= No.
5b) An unfairly victimized species? (Like 'everyone hunts it, makes it into food or enslaves it' etc.)
= No.


PLOT
FUTURE

1) Does your character get paired up with Munch/Stranger/Abe?
= Yes, with Abe, only to help him with certain points.
1a) And have their babies? (I hereby slap you if its Abe)
= No chance.

PRESENT
2) Does your character not remember their past?
= Partially.
2a) If/when they figure it out, is it angst and dramatic?
= Dramatic. Loss of mother and such.
2b) Did they suffer abuse in this past? (Doesn't count for regular slave species treatment)
= Uh, no then..
2c) If they were badly abused, do they not have the mental scars to go with it? (Like genophobia if they were sexually abused, etc.)
= No.

3) Is your character related to one of the official characters? = Besides being born from the same queen as other Mudokons?
3a) Secretely?
= No.
3b) One of the goodies?
= Could say that.

PAST
4) If your character has been a slave(eg mudokon), were they treated worse than most slaves?
= No.
4a) Beaten harder/suffered worse violent treatment?
= Partially.
4b) Suffered sexual abuse? (Which seems ridiculous in Oddworld to me)
= No.


POWERS
MAGIC

1) Is your character some super duper immortal thingy?
= No.

2) Can your character use shrykul power, or some other super power?
= Only through passing the trials that Abe does, he can use Tele/Psychokinesis good after passing the Kinesis Challanges.
6a) Do they have the Shrykul power even though they never got the handscars from going through the Paramonia and Scrabania temples?
= No.

PHYSICAL

LOOKS


1) If your character is a mudokon, is it a colour other than green?
= Yes.
1a) Something not blue, purply or a typical mudokon colour?
= Brown-ish.

2) If your character is a female that isn't a clakker, outlaw, or other species with boobs, do they have boobs? (coughAgent80085cough)
= No.
2a) Are they big boobs or basically supposed to be hot?
= No, you could call Matthew 'pretty cute' though.


RPG SUE
(Is you RPG character...Suey?)
THE CHARACTER
1) Is your character important in the RPG?
= RPG, no, in the Exodus, partially.
1a) Allowed to do whatever they please?
= No.
1b) Because you're the boss?
= No.
1c) Or just because you said so? =
No.

2) Is your character powerful?
= Somewhat.
2a) Do they win most fights?
= No.
2b) All fights?
= No.
2c) Even if they're against something like a big bro, and aren't as big and bulky as one? (Unless of course they use their brains or something.)
= Possibility if Matthew can outsmart him.

YOU
3) Have people told you to stop powerplaying or that you powerplay too much?
= I think so.
3a) Did you deliberately ignore this?
= No..
3b) Argued that you weren't powerplaying?
= I think.
3c) Bluntly told them something like 'I don't care, it's my character and I'll do whatever I want!'
= No.
3d) Told them something along the lines of 'Screw you, I'll do whatever I want, get lost and stop bothering me!' (May the mods have mercy on you if you said that...)
= No, heh.


SPECIES SUE
(Is your made up fanspecies suey?)

1) Is your species related to one of the currently existing ones?
= Well, he's a Mudokon afterall.
1a) Is it basically bettered than the original species? (i.e., most of the induviduals are nice, the species has more magic or strength, etc)
= Well, he only has greater PK abilities.

2) Is the species victimized? (Like 'all of the other species have been sooo mean to it blablabla')
= Um, sure, play the Oddworld games.

3) Is most or all of the induviduals in the species good?
= Sure, play the games.
3a) A good industrialist species?
= Hell no.

4) Does it have good technology or magic?
= No.


CANON SUENESS
(For official characters in fanfictions)

1) Do you write about one of the official characters in your fic, and not research their personality?
= Probably.

2) If its Stranger/Munch/Abe, do they fall for your character with ease?
= No.
2a) Act all soppy or sleazy around them?
= No.

3) Did you make up their past?
= No.
3a) Is it all angsty?
= No.
3b) Was it Stranger with a super duper angst past to explain his antiheroeness? (I'm toteleh guilty of this one)
= No.

4) If you are writing about a baddie in the Oddworld series you didn't make up, did you use an angst past to excuse his evilness?
= No.


ANTI SUENESS
(Not suey things)
MENTALLY
1) Is your character a slig or other normally mean species, and still mean?
= No.
1a) And a complete sicko? = No.
1b) Have they done something so sick, it could be considered unforgivable by some?
= No.
1c) Do they never ever change for better and/or and remain evil?
= No.

2) Is your character insane? = No.
2a) Insane to the point they endanger themselves, others or can't think normally?
= No.

3) Is your character wimpy?
= Occasionally.
3a) Really wimpy?
= No.
3b) Wimpy to the point they don't fight or avoid fights?
= Rarely.
3c) Scared of things smaller than them that can't kill them? (Like bolamites.)
= Think so.

4) Is your character dumb?
= No..
4a) Very dumb?
= No.
4b) Too dumb for their own good?
= No, hehe.

PHYSICALLY

5) Is your character basically unnatractive?
= No.
5a) Just a bit dull or fat or just not overly pretty?
= No.
5b) Just plain ugly?
= No.
5c) Reeeaaally ugly?
= No.

6) Is your character disabled?
= No.
6a) Just a little handicap?
= Sort of, memory loss.
6b) A big one?
= No.
6c) Something really severe, like complete blindness?
= No.
6d) Do they have nothing to make up for it? (eg telepathy to find their way around if they're blind, etc)
= Not sure.

7) Is your character honestly weak?
= Sorta...
7a) Unable to do some things other people can bcause of it? (Like lifting certain heavy objects, etc.)
= No.
7b) Weak to the point its a disability?
= No.

8) Is your character an animal?
= Um.. is a Mudokon an animal? >>;


SUETHORNESS
(Are you...A suethor?)
YOU AND YOUR CHARACTER
1) Do you think everyone will like your character?
= Not really.
1a) Because your character is really original?
= No.
1b) Because your character is really pretty?
= No.
1c) Because your character is really hot?
= No.
1d) Because your character is really super powered?
= No.
1e) Because your character is such a good person?
= Could get so, but no.
1f) Because they will feel sorry for their angst past?
= No..

YOU AND OTHERS
2) Do you feel insulted when people critisize your character?
= Very partially.
2a) If it was proper constructive critism, were you still feeling bitter?
= Sorta.
2b) If it was proper constructive critism, did you basically tell them to get stuffed and didn't believe them?
= No.


VILLAIN SUE
(Could your bad guy be a sue?)

THE CHARACTER
1) Is your character a powerful baddie?
= No.
1a) With magic, or some other powerful force?
= No.
1c) Are they mysterious?
= No.

PLOT
2) Are they evil because of an angst past?
= No.
2a) Are they not really that evil after all?
= No.
2b) Will they turn good and join the good guys side?
= No.
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