YAY VENKS WRITING!
Ahh, this post is filled with originality, at least, this is very new to me! I've never seen a story written so closely about Fuzzles before, and I've never gotten to hear a Scrab speak before now. Maybe I missed out on a fanfic like that? To me at least, this is original and interesting, and while I usually only anticipate the next chapter of writer's stories, this was a treat.
I don't know why, I kind of want to see a story about Abe written by you as much as the next chapter. Maybe because I haven't seen many good Abe stories lately.
Anyway, excellent writing, the editting did make a difference. Good writing can be hindered if the punctuation is slightly off but this chapter read smoothly.
Keep it up, we're waiting for more! ^^