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Amazing story you've got there Venks. Its interesting to see how new members imagine how Rupture Farms started. (Arnie actually started with four Mudokons and a Slig, and no welcoming party, yet I believe you're alright)
My only suggestion is to check your puncution. I saw some missing periods, commas, and "'s. Besides that, excellent story!
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Hehe I tried to talk to Dripik about it before I wrote Chapter 2, but due to him not noticing the message I had sent him it was too late before I threw it up there.
As for my grammar, well I'm not the best at that. I actually have an
editor(Cinnamon a fellow lover of Oddworld) now, so hopefully it will be better from now on.