Haha, they're not bad, really!
I liked the first one most.
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Munch's Oddysee: The gabbiar can
The two stood on the boat, as Abe looked around shyly. "Looks like there's a lot of eggs in that can..." He began. After saying that, his yellow eyes widened in terror. Munch looked around the ship. "What?" He croaked. "Munch, that's not the gabbiar can, it's a grenade!" He screeched. the two screamed, before Munch threw the bomb not too far away. It exploded, making a hole in the ship. The two screamed and ran up the ship as the water flooded in it and it slowly sank.
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Or:
"Munch, that's not the gabbiar can, it's a grenade!", Abe screeches.
Munch throws it away in panic and both see that thing sinking in the ozean under the ship. Munch wonders why it didn't explode and looks at Abe.
Abe grins: "Just kidding!"
( Heh, that's surely the beginning of Munch's Oddysee II )