OOC: I don't mind you operating at all, MM, I'd just appreciate it if you don't take out anything that was there before she got shot.
Zozo, when you post can you start a new line when a new character talks? So rather than
"Yeah, I'm fine..." Tiro answered to Slax. "It's not the first time I got electrocuted..." Dimitrio watched Scarface nervously. "I don't like the way that guy's looking at me..." He squeaked. Agent watched Scarface as well, darkening her glare. "Hey, he isn't saying anything to you and we're here, so you'll be fine." "yeah, but..." He looked shyly away from Scarface who stood in the distance down the hall. "There's something about the way he's watching me that makes me scared..."
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"Yeah, I'm fine..." Tiro answered to Slax. "It's not the first time I got electrocuted..."
Dimitrio watched Scarface nervously. "I don't like the way that guy's looking at me..." He squeaked.
Agent watched Scarface as well, darkening her glare. "Hey, he isn't saying anything to you and we're here, so you'll be fine."
"yeah, but..." He looked shyly away from Scarface who stood in the distance down the hall. "There's something about the way he's watching me that makes me scared..."
It just makes it a lot easier for anyone reading your posts, so they can tell who said what. I'd be appreciative.
IC:
Dionysia decided right about then that she didn't like Otto (well, she hadn't liked him before, but now she was actively going out of her way to dislike him). "And what would that kind of trouble gain me? A pat on the head and a cookie? Think about it please, I have nothing to gain from getting you two in more trouble."
ooc: Jim is waiting for Dean.
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