Sorry I was so long replying to this.
It's great! I loved the atmosphere you created for the lab, the characterisation of the zrilufet (nice word, by the way) and the turn of events. Poor intern though!
And poor zrilufet, out of the fryingpan into the fire (or should I say out of the slogpit and into the electric wall!) Finds herself on the edge of a city. Can't wait for more!
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