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05-06-2007, 02:30 PM
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Wow thats pretty nice.
*Spoiler warning for any who haven't read chapter two*

I like how everything just clicks together. A famine makes sense with Glukkons and other industrials coming in the area, probably slaughtering wildlife and destroying the ecosystem. The Native Mudokons peaceful as always must find other means to get food, such as trading with Glukkons. Also stating that female Mudokons are rare which a lot of people seem to shrug off, the village must of been in a very desperate situation to give off a fertile mudokon female.. surely they realize in 40 years they will all be dead with no new young to carry on their traditions. Deep stuff.
Yeah, this is one of my darker fanfics. But desperate is right. The others in Rosie's village love her and the know that they're just going to die without any young, but they need the money. What's the point of having kids if you can't feed them? (Well, they can't have kids now anyways)
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