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04-29-2007, 07:26 AM
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Twas great, though to use constructive criticism, Anni wasn't quite right. I think she should be shorter, cus she's meant to be young.
But all the other characters I thought were great. Kix looked good, and the sligs were particularly good, though perhaps Stivik's recorder might be a little too obvious. Ah well, either way. I liked it.
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