Nice work, there. as was previously stated, everything happened rather quickly, but that's nice, to have something breeze by. It's like what you'd read if you were in a sort of 'neutral' mood or good mood, and didn't want a story that dragged on. I look forward to the next chapter.
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A man walks into a zoo. There's nothing there but one dog. It was a shih-tzu.
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