Yes I'm very sorry but everytime I'm making an edit and I send the second chapter, apparently I log out (everyone does after about 10 minutes of not doing anything on the forums...I think). Anyway, here's my second chapter:
Jordan_Boi sat there, cracking on his meat bone. Snuzi was snoring real loud, which was very annoying. Other then that, everything was quite...too quite. Too quite, as if something was gonna running through the door, with a gun and glowing white with evil red eyes. That gave Jordan the creeps, and he started towards Snuzi to wake him up. Just then something banged in the door, real loud, and Jordan heard, "HEY! OPEN UP!" Nothing happened for a few seconds. Whoever it was knocked on the door again. Jordan slowly walked towards the door, and looked through the peep hole. All he saw was something glowing red. His eyes widened, and he stuck his claws out. '
Looks like there's gonna be come violence,' he thought, and he opened the door. Something white ran in, with a gun, with glowing red eyes, charging, and ran up to Jordan and hugged him.
"HEY!!!!" SligStorm said, squeezing Jordan real tight. "Where is everyone?" SligStorm asked. Snuzi was half asleep, but he still could listen somehow.
"Light...go out...people...gone...Rex MoxCo...go look," and started to snore again.
While all of this was happening, Alf_shall_rise (
) woke up in a weird chapel, but with no benches or anywhere to sit. At the end of the room was an altar and candles were all throughout the room. Pictures of Gods and Goddesses were on the walls of the room, and there was the words, "Follow Me" painted in blood on the wall.
"How....interesting," Alf said, and he touched the blood. It was still fresh and wet, and there seemed to be a path. Along the path were cave paintings of a blue Mudokon. The same picture ran down the path. Alf had no choice but to walk down. Bloody footprints were on the floor, they were still wet too. At the end of the path was a dead end, with a letter on the floor. It read: "Shall thy avoid mischief, gain peace and freedom; but if shall thy not avoid mischief, gain pain and death"
"How...very interesting," Alf said, putting the letter into his loin cloth pocket. But just then he felt something else in his loin cloth...it felt like...TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Again, sry for the double post.
