OOC: That's a pretty good start Arxryl, I just thought I'd point out, although it'll probably be fine, most people arrive by train and I'm not sure if there
is actually any entrance to Rupture Farms that is easily accessable on foot. But I probably don't know what I'm talking about, so...
The other thing, that I think a few people here should really start doing, is when referring to another character, making it sound like your own character's observation is
perfectly fine,
but make sure you identify who it is, like by using parentheses or something.
For example, saying:
"Then he noticed a mudokon standing by the grinder"
gives everyone else some hint of who it is (they're next to a grinder), but saying something like:
"Then he noticed a mudokon (Bob) standing by the grinder"
means that everyone
knows that it's Bob that you're referring to.
Hope this helps, and welcome to the RPG!
I've also just realised that putting Ralph to work at the grinders has severely limited what I can do with him
Slaveless, not meaning to be a nuisance, but can you remind me where each of your mudokons in the grinding area is and what each is doing? (I've sort of lost track and it's going to be difficult to search through the whole thread to find out)
IC:
As Ralph continued working, he noticed another glukkon (Marv) walk up to the group. Perhaps Rupture Farms was trying to get a council of glukkons here again? Then he noticed a metallic slig (Molt) enter the grinding area down the same stairs he'd come down himself earlier and walk up to the glukkons.
A cyborg slig? Must be the work of those sick Vykkers, he reasoned. He'd seen one of them here earlier. He would have to check this place out when he got the chance, and see what else they'd done around here...