You are creative and have an interesting eye for designing characters. however, I really think you should steer away a little from the Vasquez style. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just he's a very defined artist well known for his own style and ONLY his style and as an artist you should try and develop your own kind of style as you pursue art. I'm not saying totally revamp your stuff, just make it speak for yourself more. Other than that, it's good plus you have an interesting way of writing numbers
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