OOC: Zero, your problems are:
A. You need to make longer, indepth posts. Try referring to the environment, your characters thoughts (such as his environment, those around him etc.), character movement etc.
B. Specifically interact with someone. Asking won't get you anywhere. read through the more recent pages and make your character go up and talk to someone, rather than waiting. Yelling a specific name would be an option, but unrealistic at this stage as your character doesn't know anyone else's names yet. Read through the past few pages, see someone who's in the cafeteria, go up to them and talk to them. Since you presumably wouldn't know their names, refer to species and distuingishing features (i.e. Zero walked up to a Steef, a large male, with a broken horn. he was black in colour. Zero said...) etc. etc.
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