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02-02-2007, 12:47 PM
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ooc: ZERO, if you actually listened you would realise we have been trying to give you advice.
Your most recent post was a lot better than previous ones, but if you look at te map on the first post of this thread, you'll notice Rupture Farms doesn't have a 'front door'. Most people arrive by train. I guess you could find some way of climbing over the fence of the stockyards and walking in the front entrance. The door isn't closed so you won't have to knock, and the cafeteria is near to the entrance and there are a fair number of people there for you to interact with.

Sligger, I can understand Phil knowing Arnie isn't in the office cus obviously he didn't answer the knock, but how did he know Arnie would be in the cafeteria? Maybe you could edit that your guy is feeling hungry so he goes to get some food and coincidentally runs into Arnie.

IC:
Anni and Jim continued to prowl through the lower levels of the abandoned tower. Before long they passed through a low doorway, having to bend over to fit, what with the place not exactly being designed for mudokons, and found themselves in some sort of very small food-preperation area. Somi, creeping at their heels, commented, "It's good there's no food left here, or this place would be full of animals."
Anni asked, "Can you smell anything now?"
"Not really. There might be one or two fleeches about, but not enough to bother you with me here. I can't sense anything else."
Jim, meanwhile, hurried across the kitchen to the sink and twisted a tap. No water came out. He tried the other and apart from a few dirty drips nothing emerged. "There's no water. Maybe they cut off the supply to this place."
Anni looked worried before saying, "But there was water dripping back in the passage, so there must be a supply somewhere. Mybe the pipe's blocked?"
Jim though about it. "The drips I think were coming more from the ceiling, than the pipes. Maybe there's a sink or something upstairs that'll work? The meech might have found it."
Anni nodded, "Well lets go up and see if he has."
Jim nodded and they headed back down the kitchen towards the entrance.


ooc: Still waiting for you Slaveless. Gappiqu really ought to be the one to decide where they go. (You don't have to talk much on the journey. Just say 'they arrived -wherever-')
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