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02-01-2007, 08:51 AM
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Nice Zelda reference. I like it. I can just imagine that now. And the bit with the fireflies was cool as well. I like this. Keep it up.
I will keep it up! I felt like randomly doing something about Zelda lol.

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Interesting outcome of combined magic. Plus the Zelda sound is cool to. Can't wait to read more.
Thanks a lot!

Here's another chapter, I hope it's enjoyed!

Garnet shook her head, making dust fly from her hair.
"Bleh, I hate dust!" Garnet moaned, blowing a raspberry.
Amethyst stepped away from her twin, avoiding the spit coming from her mouth.
When Garnet had finished wiping dirt off her, the twins walked towards the wall that they had shot their spell at. It had a large crack up it.
"What a strong wall..." Garnet said sadly, placing her hand on the deep crack.
Suddenly, the wall crumbled, and bits of rock smashed to the floor, revealing more dust. Amethyst stepped over the sharp rocks and looked into the new room, Garnet followed.
Garnet had a sudden fit of coughing, leaving her unable to move.
Amethyst moved to pat her on the back, but Garnet lifted her hand and shooed her away. "I'll--be--alright!" she coughed.
Amethyst looked at her, unsure, but then carried on to investigate the room.
There was nothing but blue fire-lit torches, and a lot of heavy debris.
But something else caught the interested Mudokon's eye, there were two story stones a couple of steps away from eachother.
She slowly walked towards the left one, her bare feet crunching underneath the tiny pebbles on the dirty floor.
As she stared at it, she heard crunching behind her, forgetting that her sister was there, she turned and she saw Garnet's pink face smiling at her stupidly.
"HELLO!!" She shouted annoyingly, Amethyst tapped her lightly on the cheek.
Garnet stuck her tongue out at her.
"So... What are these for?" she asked her twin stupidly.
Amethyst shrugged and stuck her paw into it.
"I don't see anything," she said, shaking her head.
Garnet sighed and tutted at her sister. "Here, let me try!" she exclaimed excitedly, going over to the story stone on the right.
She placed her paw inside and started stomping with her feet.
"It won't work, stupid thing!!" she cried, throwing a scranny.
But suddenly, they heard a loud laser-like sound, and a beam of light appeared on the far side of the room.
There was a slim figure inside it. The figure appeared to be a female Mudokon, she seemed to be crying...
"My children... You finally found this..." she sniffled, but then a smile appeared on her beautiful face.
Amethyst and Garnet looked at her, wide-eyed.
"I am your mother, and I send this request... This is my free soul form, this'll be what I look like if I wasn't imprisoned by the Vykkers..." Sam explained slowly.
A tear appeared in Garnet's eye. "Mummy...?"
Sam the Mudokon queen nodded, and carried on. "Yes, it is me..." she sighed.
"I love you both, so, so much... And I ask you to do something for me, please..."
Sam paused, and looked at her daughters. Amethyst lifted her head, and smiled slowly. "What is it, Mum?" she asked kindly.
Sam closed her eyes, and began to speak. "I'd like you to... Free me!" She said quickly, looking hopefully at her twins.
"Mum... Of course we will!" Garnet said happily, staring at her mother, giving a little laugh.
"Yeah, what's that train station called?" Amethyst asked her holographic mother. Sam laughed, "FeeCo Depot," she said helpfully.
Garnet looked disgusted when hearing this.
"We're gonna find FeeCo, and get you outta that blasted place!" Amethyst told her mother, lifting her hand.
"Thankyou... My daughters!" Sam laughed thankfully.
Soon after, she dissapeared. "Well, it looks like we're saving Mum at last!" Garnet shouted loudly, doing a little dance.
"Yes, I guess we are!" Amethyst said, putting her arm around Garnet.
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