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02-01-2007, 06:10 AM
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Hello Nemo. Your stuff's looking good, but you might want to put speech on a new line each time, otherwise it's kind of like this huge chunk of text and looks a bit unreadable, you know? Anyway, nice stuff, keep writing.
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