I like the story, in a sense that it was touching. It really steps aside from the real world and makes some sense. It reminds me of movie in which a woman had to prove she was good before she went to heaven. Or in other movies, where some man had loved his girlfriend so much, when he died early, he remained with her, trying to keep her alive. I also like the bits where it seems like it is a story being told! Reminds me of my own fan fic. *sigh* Never able to get writing into it. It has been unfinished for a year now!
Anyway, good story. But I don't get how Rae being naive is important to the story. Sorry, it was just something that bugged me.
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