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IC: "hey you, roid can you help me join this place" said zero.
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Now I'm not the RP master, and I'm not trying to be nasty. Well, maybe a LITTLE.
But seriously - at least look at everyone elses posts around here, just to see how it's done. There are like, so many differences in what you're doing and what they're doing.
1) Longer posts.
2) We know where these characters are.
3) We have detailed description of what is going on and what is happening.
If you want, you could have someone write an entrance paragraph or something for you, then you could follow that style. Right now it's kind of hard to tell anything from the posts you make.
My little ranty, my little ranty... you'll always be in my brain...
(OT: Damn, my brain is spouting crap, I think it's bed time!
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